Firstly, I think I am doing very well in this class so far. When I did not pass this class before, I thought this is the end, but by the help of Prof Smith. I improved a lot. As he said (you will be fine in two weeks) I really improved in writing the essays. Now I know how to organize my essays .First I write the introduction with the main idea of the whole passage. Then I write about my opinion if I agree or disagree and the reasons why I agree or not. The second paragraph is about the summery of the whole passage. The next three or four paragraphs are about the evidences and my personal experience in life. By the end I write about the main idea again from new perspective. Last essay We wrote about I did very good I think, and I wrote until the end of last sheet..Furthermore, I think what I need to do is to work on my sentences, because until now I don’t know how to built a good sentence .Also I Know a lot of new words and I have it in my mind but I don’t know how to use it. So I need to work on that also. The most important thing I improved in is how to use the internet and the computer which I am so happy about it because I took it as a new conflict for me and I think I succeeded .I am not good enough in typing, but also I improved a lot. So by the end I want to thank you Prof Smith for what you did to me .and I hope I pass this class with high grades ,not only passing.
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