blog entry 12-reflection and evaluation

                      Firstly, I think I am doing very well in this class so far. When I did not pass this class before, I thought this is the end, but by the help of Prof Smith. I improved a lot. As he said (you will be fine in two weeks) I really improved in writing the essays. Now I know how to organize my essays .First I write the introduction with the main idea of the whole passage. Then I write about my opinion if I agree or disagree and the reasons why I agree or not. The second paragraph is about the summery of the whole passage. The next three or four paragraphs are about the evidences and my personal experience in life. By the end I write about the main idea again from new perspective. Last essay We wrote about I did very good I think, and I wrote until the end of last sheet..Furthermore, I think what I need to do is to work on my sentences, because until now I don’t know how to built a good sentence .Also I Know a lot of new words and I have it in my mind but I don’t know how to use it. So I need to work on that also. The most important thing I improved in is how to use the internet and the computer which I am so happy about it because I took it as a new conflict for me and I think I succeeded .I am not good enough in typing, but also I improved a lot. So by the end I want to thank you Prof Smith for what you did to me .and I hope I pass this class with high grades ,not only passing.

blog entry 11-The final one.

          This is amazing subject to write about,( The dangers of reality shows) the article by author Timothy Sexton states that , the reality TV shows affected the young fans badly.These TV shows are targeting the young boys and girls. The makers of these TV shows insisted on sending out wrong massages to the young fans and keep them busy all the time. They let them be far away from the duties they have to do. I actually agree with the writer so much, because what this reality shows present, ruined and destroyed our young youth's brains. They keep them busy about what they should do in their lives. They destroyed the value of big meanings in our lives, like education, hard work and dreaming.

             Reality TV shows valued believe of competition. They made young people believe that life is very easy. By some competitions, people can earn good money like thousands or millions. They can have this money without work or effort. They present  competition as the main source for success, not work or education. Also between these massages that TV shows present, they give the prize to the unqualified contestant by the end of the show, just because he has charisma or he or she is hipper in front of the fans. The most important message they give to the young people is, the unvalued of education. Education is not important like before. Young youth can earn a lot of money without going to colleges or high schools. How they can go to schools or colleges, while they can earn a lot of money in these TV shows.

            Firstly, I want to talk about competitions, and how they present them as the key for success in life. TV shows like super star, they put young boys and girls together in one place for a long time. Every week, one of the contestants has to go out of the show. They were able to attach young boys and girls to the screen for maybe three months. By the end, we can see that the competition has no meaning, boring and what happened last year, it happens this year. By the end of the competition, we know about the winner, who is not qualified to it. It has to do with the money makers and how they control the young people brains.

            Furthermore, sometimes this contestant is not good enough to win, but they let him win just because he or she attached the fans to the screen, even thought this contestant is not qualified, but they have something that people love to watch. They take the winner as a package. They don’t care if he or she has lack of personality for example. The American idol 2 years ago, they let one of the contestant win because he has the family picture. He has a wife and a father and a mother .Actually he was not good enough to win, and the good one that should win, didn’t just because he was gay.

            The most important and dangerous massage that these TV shows present is about education. These show unvalued the education. They convinced the young youth that they can make money with education, which it will affect, the globe on the long run. For me every time I go to my son’s room, I see him watching these shows. Ones I had conversation with him about education, and I was shocked. He said that education is not that important now days like before. He said that he can participate in one of these shows and make money more than if he went to college for four years. He said that if he graduates for college, how long it takes him to get a job? What kind of job, he will give him the money he wants. You know, I was afraid, because if this is the way that young youth are thinking. It means that there is something wrong. There is no value of a lot of things considered value like education, hard work and dreaming. Everything now related to money. Our society only cares about money and nothing but money. It is frightened.

              By the end, we are responsible towards our kids. We can prevent them from watching these shows. Make value of everything we believe in for them, like hard work, learn how to earn money from their own hard work. Earn money from good education. Let them dream and believe in their dreams because one day these dreams will come true. So it is our responsibility.                         

             

blog entry 11-in progress

              This is amazing subject to write about,( The dangers of reality shows) the article by author Timothy Sexton states that , the reality tv shows affected the young fans badily.These Tv shows are targiting the young boys and girls. The makers of these Tv shows insisted on sending out wrong masseges to the young fans and keep them busy all the time. they let them be far away from the duties they have to do.I acaully agree with the writer so much, because what these reality shows present ruined and destroyed our young youth's brains.They keep them busy about what they should do in thier lives.They destroyed the value of big meanings in our lives, like education, hard work and dreaming.

             Reality Tv shows valued the believe of competition. They made young people believe that life is very easy.By some competitions , people can earn good money like thousands or millions.They can have this money without worh or effort.They present that comepition as the main source to success, not work or education.Also between these masseges that Tv shows present            
            

blog entry 10

I will talk about the most singnaficant idea in the matrix movie which is something is going wrong with this world right now.Technology is controlling our minds and our brains.
“Claim”
I agree with the idea that computers are controlling us right now.as this controllement is good or bad, I believe that we shouldn’t be stongly prisoned to it..
'Reason"computers and technology every where in the whole.
"evidence"Facebook and social network are controlling the world right now. 

blog entry 9- Telecommute class

                      Ok.First I  would like to thank Dr Jason, because he let me have this interesting class online. This is the first time for me to take such a class. It was very interesting and very useful for me.I watched the matrix movie two times. The first time I did not get it quiet well, but the second time I got the most singnaficant idea, which is (choices in life, or to be or not to be).I liked all the other opinions in the discussion.Especially the opinions about the red pill and the blue pill.I faced some diffeculty when I strarted, but after a while it was ok. As I said this is a new experience for me.I hope to do it one more time to get use to it in the future.So thank you Dr Jason one more time.  

blog entry 8 -Topic 5 Self determination.

               I want to talk about the struggling that Truman faced from his society.All the people around him were actors in a silly play . They lied on him . They were against him.They know the truth that he is in a reality show and they faked him. Even his wife, his best friend and the whole town. He was controlled by this " Cristoff" the owner of the reality show.He has this "NO" inside himself, but he could't say it.By the end he was able to say it. He was able to go out from his prison and see the wonderful world outside. he reminded me of the prisoner that was in "The allegory of the cave"when he broke the chains and ran into the outside world.The new world that he wanted.
                I know that every one might read my essay, but I don't mind. First.I  will talk about the fear that live inside Truman The fear that live inside people.Fear from everything around them. Fear from the past .Fear from the present and fear from the future.We all have this moment when we expose to this fear, and maybe from the nearest people around us.
                I was 17 years old, when I faced this fear from my beloved father , and I said beloved because I love him so much.When my father insisted to let me marry to some one I did not see him only for one time, just because he was rich and he was his cousin.How you can let two people met for only few times to get marry and have a family. 
                And because I was young I could not say no.I lived my life.I went to college . I had two children,but inside my self I was not happy.Inside my self I always said no but I couldn't do it. Until I grow up. My mind and my brain grow up with me.I decided to make my choice by my own hand .I decicded to take this step that I wanted to take, but I could'nt.
                When I came to the United states, my whole life changed.I made up my mind that, this is the right choise for me to take. I choose to live by my self. I got ride of that fear which lived in me for a long time. I got separated. Now  I live by my self. I found unagreement in the begining, but after a while.I got support from all people that live around me even my father.Now I go to college and I work full time. I take care of my father and my mother. I take care of my kids.. When I took this responsibility, it was not easy for me or my kids, but life goes by. Time is the best treatment to any problem. Just try to be your self. Don't fake the others with fake feelings, you don't have it inside you. Live your life with your own mind .Don't let any one controll you.Get ride of that fear inside you. live happy.When you feel that you did what you always wanted. You will live happy with your family, friends even with your self.I hate fear and I got ride of it.

blog entry 8-topic 5

                I know that every one might read my essay, but I don't mind. First. I will start my essay about fear that live inside people.Fear from everything around them. Fear from the past .Fear from the present and fear from the future.We all have this moment when we expose to this fear, and maybe from the nearest people around us.
                I was 17 years old, when I faced this fear from my beloved father , and I said beloved because I love him so much.When my father insisted to let me marry to some one I did not see him only for one time, just because he was rich and he was his cousin.How you can let two people met for only few times to get marry and have a family.
                And because Iwas young I could not say no.I lived my life.I went to college . I had two children,but inside my self I was not happy. Something inside me always say no.Untile I grow up and my mind and my brain grow up with me.I decided to make my choise.I decicded to take this step that I always wanted to take, but I could'nt.
                When I came to the United states, my whole life changed.I made up my mind that, this is the right choise for me to take. I choose to live by my self. I got ride of that fear which lived in me for a long time. I got seperated . I live by my self now . I found unagreement in the begining, but after a while.I got support from all people that live around me even my father.Now Igo to college and I work full time .In the begining it was not easy for me or my kids, but life goes by. Time is the best treatment to any problem. Just try to be your self. Don't fake the others with fake feelings, you don't have it inside you. Live your life with your own mind .Don't let any one controll you.Get ride of that fear inside you. live happy.When you feel that you did what you always wanted. You will live happy with your family, friends even with your self.I hate fear and I got ride of it.